It's cute and a nice first game. The art is cute and expressive. I hope you make another! I think the story would benefit from being a little longer and having some more proofreading. The credits mentioned some English translation, so I'm guessing it isn't your first language, so having an English writer take a quick look could help smooth it out.
YES <3 thank you yeah i did want to make it longer but sadly i found out about the game jam very late and only had 6 days to do everything from scratch, glad you liked the art <3
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BUEN muy buena !
It's cute and a nice first game. The art is cute and expressive. I hope you make another!
I think the story would benefit from being a little longer and having some more proofreading. The credits mentioned some English translation, so I'm guessing it isn't your first language, so having an English writer take a quick look could help smooth it out.
YES <3 thank you
yeah i did want to make it longer but sadly i found out about the game jam very late and only had 6 days to do everything from scratch, glad you liked the art <3
Oh yeah, I know that feeling, my team was also a late starter. Still a great showing for a first game and only six days
Had a nice time reading this. I really enjoyed the art!
Thank you <3 <3 Really appreciate that you liked it <3
A short but sweet tale of toxic yuri that will stub out a cigarette on your neck and then kiss the burn better. Highly recommend.
Thank you so much! <3 <3